1337-Dawg's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ryder Revenge part02]

Great

but the inner and the outer hands keep getting mixed up

[Madness Portal Short]

Lol! Funny

Ur taking 4ever on Madness Portal. Hey u even kno howto mask? I noticed u didnt mask for when he went thru teh portals. Masking aint hard

[Madness Forfeit]

This didnt get blammed?! (no offense)

100% Choppyness. Looks like u used 1 layer.

Johannesson responds:

I only used 2 layers. At the time I sucked really hard.

[Madness Incorrigability]

Great if ur a beginner

Tips:

1. Make the Madness Characters' body lean a lil.

2. Use A lot of layers! I think u did but just checking

3. Where's da feet? Ppl need feetings!

4. Put music during the animation and not only the credits.

5. Use the zoom in transition or the fade in and out transitions when ur changing scenes.

6. Try using masking for walkin thru doors.

8. Add a lil more speed.

9. Add gun flashes for when they shoot. Add animated blood to

10. Credits went by too fast. Wut r credits for? For reading them! =P

Overall: Great but not if ur a pro =P! Good work! And remember: NEVER GIVE UP!

Atgod88 responds:

Thanks for all the tips, this was basically a test in a sense that I wanted to just make something. Out of boredom, I'm going to respond to every point you made.

1. I didn't have any leaning because I bound characters bodies and heads as one object.

2. I used two layers, one for animation and another for music, didn't know what layers did at the time.

3. Feet were to complicated at the time.

4. Wasn't sure what to use and was an after thought.

5. Didn't have a V-Cam, thats why the weird flash size, tried to fit in backgrounds.

6. Didn't know what masking was.

7. ?

8. I didn't use any tweens so it was hard to adjust speed since I was new to flash.

9. There were very small muzzle flashes. Completely forgot about animated blood lol.

10. Just lazy timing and lack of testing.

Overall: Great review.

Thanks.

[Madness Tehification]

Good good

Short but u got skill. Make a full length one! Lol at the end of the main song it says "okay =D!" wtf

hmm i wonder y every1 h8s u

7IsUnlucky responds:

hmm i wonder y u b usn so bad grmr

also I've quit animating

[Madness Aggregation]

BESTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!

THIS IS THE BEST EPISODE YET!

[Madness: Short 1]

You have skill dude

Don't give up!