1337-Dawg's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[MZM 69 2 Preview]

Lol

That was actually pretty funny. Good animation, well u put each character into one symbol, but still good. The fps was good, and there was a decent amout of laughs. gj =PPP. xDDDDD

kanamomashouse responds:

Hey thanks alot. Good luck with your collab.

[Madness Everywhere Collab]

Verry nice collab

great man just great! anyway how did u do the preloader 3D madness head thing? if action scipt, what scipt u use?

L3pra responds:

a very nice script

[mc4 remix peak scenes 1-3]

no offense

but i animated better when i first got flash (first animation) work on everything

Hank66 responds:

ok..

[3-D Stick Test]

Nice

perfection! how did u make the guns go 3-d and flip around and stuff

Rockyusa responds:

I downloaded a 3-D gun sheet.

[Madness Easter Special]

Lol nice

but isnt this based on a comic thingy made by LLL?

GabrielBarsch responds:

yeah

[Madness Forfeit]

This didnt get blammed?! (no offense)

100% Choppyness. Looks like u used 1 layer.

Johannesson responds:

I only used 2 layers. At the time I sucked really hard.

[Madness Incorrigability]

Great if ur a beginner

Tips:

1. Make the Madness Characters' body lean a lil.

2. Use A lot of layers! I think u did but just checking

3. Where's da feet? Ppl need feetings!

4. Put music during the animation and not only the credits.

5. Use the zoom in transition or the fade in and out transitions when ur changing scenes.

6. Try using masking for walkin thru doors.

8. Add a lil more speed.

9. Add gun flashes for when they shoot. Add animated blood to

10. Credits went by too fast. Wut r credits for? For reading them! =P

Overall: Great but not if ur a pro =P! Good work! And remember: NEVER GIVE UP!

Atgod88 responds:

Thanks for all the tips, this was basically a test in a sense that I wanted to just make something. Out of boredom, I'm going to respond to every point you made.

1. I didn't have any leaning because I bound characters bodies and heads as one object.

2. I used two layers, one for animation and another for music, didn't know what layers did at the time.

3. Feet were to complicated at the time.

4. Wasn't sure what to use and was an after thought.

5. Didn't have a V-Cam, thats why the weird flash size, tried to fit in backgrounds.

6. Didn't know what masking was.

7. ?

8. I didn't use any tweens so it was hard to adjust speed since I was new to flash.

9. There were very small muzzle flashes. Completely forgot about animated blood lol.

10. Just lazy timing and lack of testing.

Overall: Great review.

Thanks.

[Madness Tehification]

Good good

Short but u got skill. Make a full length one! Lol at the end of the main song it says "okay =D!" wtf

hmm i wonder y every1 h8s u

7IsUnlucky responds:

hmm i wonder y u b usn so bad grmr

also I've quit animating

[MTL3(Madness Deportation)]

so good ^^

but wuts the song called? its addicting

7IsUnlucky responds:

which one